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The Wind Whispers Peace to Me

gentle air passes
caressing my forlorn face
with magic fingers
my cripple hope gets a boost
the wind whispers peace to me

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  1. Date: 10/16/2012 6:54:00 AM

    gently it whispers,great write Modupe

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 11:58:00 AM

    Very good Tanka here!Thanks for reading my haiku and the soupmail.I am unable to reply the soupmail just now due to some error.I will reply it later......kash

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 3:14:00 AM

    Modupe,there is nothing as cherishable as peace.This poem is highly figurative and its worth forefront position .'Eshe'

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 10:41:00 AM

    Lovely - "my cripple hope gets a boost" - really like that line.

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 2:03:00 AM

    VERY nice, Modupe. I hope it wins.

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 2:02:00 AM

    VERY nice, Modupe. hope it wins.

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 5:27:00 AM

    wonderful write Modupe.....winning wishes....thanks for stopping by...