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Sad Love

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                                                       Looking for right love
                                                  But love always gets me sad
                                                    What have I done wrong?
                                                    I end up in wrong person
                                                That’s why I stay single right?
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                                                 Wrong time and wrong place
                                                 Wrong person I always chase
                                                        What happen to me?
                                                        I am in deep misery
                                                   Gosh, is this my fate really?
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 7th Place Winner
Tanka Sad Song by: Poet Destroyer's Contest
10.11.12


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  1. Date: 10/23/2012 9:22:00 AM

    My hearty congratulations on your win my dear Mary! love/hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 4:44:00 AM

    Congratulations on your fine win Maria xx

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 4:56:00 PM

    Awesome and fine write,Maria....Good job..Congrats on your superb win...

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:53:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Maria. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 10:56:00 AM

    congrads on your win Maria..

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 9:17:00 AM

    Great stuff Maria...many congrats!!!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 7:23:00 AM

    Congrats on your win! loved being inside your head :)

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 2:45:00 PM

    I can relate, congrats on your win Maria

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:53:00 AM

    Maria, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:10:00 AM

    I sometimes feel the same way. Well out and thank you for your comment. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 7:36:00 AM

    Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Maria. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 7:20:00 PM

    Oh, I am so glad to read this my friend! Sorry, I've almost missed it. This is really sad but don't worry my dear, I am pretty sure our time comes and the best will come (smile). Good luck always! hugs:)LG

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 12:46:00 AM

    The shape of this reminds me of a tree. Did you mean for that? Sure to please the judge of the sad tanka contest.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 9:45:00 AM

    sad... i'm sure you'll find ur mr. right when the right time ocomes

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 10/11/2012 12:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks friend Apoorva..hope so :)
  1. Date: 10/11/2012 3:38:00 AM

    Really a sad poem here Maria.Hope you will find the right person (If it is your story).Best wishes to you.

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 10/11/2012 3:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks friend Kash..its my story :)