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First Night

In silence the town sleeps
We snuggle close for just a while
On soft padded feet the night creeps
I see the lust in your smile
And try to hold you back awhile

You crush the roses on my chest
To feel my racing heart beat
As the rhythm reaches a crest
The room is filled with searing heat
Oh the teardrop tastes so sweet

As sunlight enters the bridal room
Sleepily I purr on the rug
Loving the floral, musky perfume
You kiss my lips with a face so smug
And lightly push me towards the coffee mug
11/10/12


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  1. Date: 11/8/2012 2:23:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 12:00:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win in the "Romance" contest Tahera. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 8:39:00 AM

    Congratulations Tahera, a super write xx

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 6:41:00 AM

    congrats on your win Tahera....nicely done

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 10:31:00 PM

    congrats Tahera on your 6th place win in the contest

    Mannan Avatar Tahera Mannan Date: 11/7/2012 1:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Francine for my placement in your contest.
  1. Date: 10/31/2012 10:52:00 AM

    this is wonderful Tahera, so romantic, yet so true to life, one must have their coffee in a morning

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 1:13:00 PM

    Ah! such soft sweet romantic write. Lovely, enjoyed reading this a lot. Good luck to you for the contest.

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:57:00 PM

    Amazing and passionate descriptive poem. You have a great talent for prtrying scenes to the reader.

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 10:40:00 AM

    Just beautiful Tahera! You've described the scenery so well. Nice!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 7:58:00 AM

    enjoyed the visual language of your sensual piece, tahera... really dreamy and well scribed!... best wishes and huggs, hon!..:)

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 8:53:00 AM

    Love and marriage romanticly expressed..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 1:49:00 AM

    wow, very passionate indeed. Great writing!

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 9:43:00 AM

    amazing write <3

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 3:44:00 AM

    Very passionate write Tahera.You have got a winner here!

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 11:24:00 PM

    adorable

    Mannan Avatar Tahera Mannan Date: 10/11/2012 12:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks