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About This Poem

Let the Moon Watch






Trespassing moonlight--
I envy its touch on  you
and light a candle,
let the moon watch from the sky
thousand moons' birth in our love




© kash poet
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  1. WACHIRA Avatar
    BERNARD WACHIRA
    Date: 11/6/2012 2:22:00 AM
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    GREAT WRITE KASH
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 10/21/2012 4:19:00 PM
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    This sounds romantic, in a very eastern way. Westerners do not usually think of the moon as birthing love. I really like the difference a few words can make.
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 10/19/2012 1:36:00 PM
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    Breathtaking and beautiful. You have such a romantic soul ! :)
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    Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/18/2012 8:05:00 PM
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    moonlight is beautiful, as is your tanka...love the hint of jealousy within the passion!
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    Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/16/2012 9:40:00 PM
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    a lot of romance here,,,,, very nice,,, blessings of the day to you ;}
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    Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 10/16/2012 7:25:00 PM
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    I love the last line on this Kash. Should count how many moons we have seen over the years. Ah shucks to many to count. Love your poem. love phyl
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    Tanya Harrington
    Date: 10/16/2012 1:11:00 PM
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    Rich with romance. Wonderful. :) Tanya
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 10/16/2012 8:16:00 AM
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    beautiful thought and a fine Tanka!! Jag
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 10/15/2012 2:12:00 AM
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    kashi, i have watched your moon many times... gotta give me a new moon!..lol... looking forward..:) huggs!
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 10/14/2012 4:18:00 AM
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    Big congrats from Spain xx
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 10/13/2012 10:57:00 PM
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    thumbs up, kashi.. missed ya, bud.. so many reunions this weekend... krinnng krinng!..:) huggs
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    Lee Ramage
    Date: 10/13/2012 10:09:00 PM
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    Hi Kash, well done. Lovely tanka, Lee
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    craig cornish
    Date: 10/13/2012 8:19:00 AM
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    Hey Kash, This form is so difficult to do well for me anyway--but I think you just nailed it!!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/13/2012 1:28:00 AM
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    what the heck? I'm just finally gonna fave this one!!!
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    Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/12/2012 11:18:00 PM
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    very nice Tanka friend Kash :) congratulations!! **Maria**
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 10/12/2012 3:30:00 PM
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    Ahhh! Romantic..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate your opinion..Sara
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    Goran Rahim
    Date: 10/12/2012 2:44:00 PM
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    well penned tanka kash. thank you for stopping by my poem. well appriciated
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    Joseph May
    Date: 10/12/2012 8:47:00 AM
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    nicely penned ...congrats on your win Kash
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 10/12/2012 8:38:00 AM
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    Dada, congrads on your win..but you are always and will be my syllable superman and you the one whoshowed me howmany syllables.com/....I really cherish your advice.no one better to ask than yuou.
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    Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 10/12/2012 7:39:00 AM
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    Brilliant write here Kash, just genius. Hugs, Gail
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    Tim Ryerson
    Date: 10/12/2012 5:18:00 AM
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    Exquisitely done Kash...second line is a knock-out...congrats on your win - Tim
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 10/12/2012 3:23:00 AM
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    Wonder how I missed out on reading this one. Splendorous romantic tanka here. great work and congratulations on your great win!
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    Modupe Sefunmi
    Date: 10/12/2012 3:12:00 AM
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    Congrats on your win!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/12/2012 12:18:00 AM
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    I adore this one!! Congratulations, Kashinath.
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    Tahera Mannan
    Date: 10/11/2012 11:10:00 PM
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    Beautiful Kash, Many congrats on this win.

    Courtney Avatar Ruth Courtney Date: 10/12/2012 2:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    nice
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 10/11/2012 10:45:00 PM
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    Very nice Kash. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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    Delilah Ventura
    Date: 10/11/2012 7:23:00 PM
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    That was so sweet....
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 10/11/2012 3:25:00 PM
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    so romantic! gotta love all those moons!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 10/11/2012 12:40:00 PM
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    A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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    Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/11/2012 12:19:00 PM
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    this is full of romance...congratulations on ur win....:))
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