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Wanderer

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Wanderer

We step out.

Begin our walk into the road
to get closer to the unknown,
we follow trails that have been left
at times aloft 
and
at times lost.

Still guided by loving hands
as if pushed by a whistling wind
fully unaware that we have arrived,
hesitantly,
our feet stand
within its gate.

we have arrived
we’re home
at last.

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  1. Date: 10/26/2012 8:23:00 AM
    Hi, could you review my poems.

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 8:13:00 AM
    I love this poem. I was engaged from the beginning of the poem until the end. She is a poet she's not an amateur and her poetry speaks to me the reader. I have arrived and I have changed in the past year or two in a good way. I have wandered but I didn't get lost in the chaos or the abyss. This is an uplifting poem and an affirming poem. The reader can feel the emotion. I like the part about the unknown the unchartered places and arriving home like to your home or the homepage of Poetry soup.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 1:26:00 PM
    aida there is no doubt you have arrived, this journey reminds us of the things that make us feel safe, I like it, well done...David

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 7:31:00 PM
    I am charmed by your poem, aida. True, home has such a great magnetic power that puls you towards it. A beautiful write. Thank you for your kind words about my poem Love. -Farida

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 3:17:00 PM
    Hi Aida there is no place like home thats for sure, always feeel safe there, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 7:26:00 AM
    Aida,Aid the world by getting this outstanding piece published

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 1:56:00 PM
    Sweet piece my poet dear. Poetry as pretty as your smile. Well written journey. Michael

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 11:11:00 AM
    Exotically romantic good piece. Cheers

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 4:22:00 PM
    A good poem Aida - Romantic .... hand in hand in life's road - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 4:11:00 PM
    nice write Aida,what does the mat read,WELCOME