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The Misfits

Calling out across the plain, Round em up Walley, we're going on a cattle drive....
Come on Becky Sue its time to rise and shine honey pooh; ruff ruff ruff, ruff ruff
Those dang dogs, everytime they spot a rabbit running after a flock of red robins
They go bonkos start spinning in tiny circles pissing upon the fire then the coffee 
Gets colder than a Jersey shore aneath a late December's starry starry night; Hey
Dusty, make sure you water the camels and feed the monkeys before we pull out 
Of here alright and tell Walley to get a move on if we're gonna make New York by
Sunset and tell Jethro to stop flirting with Becky Sue, this is serious shit; Hurry up
There's a storm coming I can feel it in my bones; Don't you see look at the script ?
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...."The Misfits" *



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  1. Date: 11/26/2012 1:10:00 AM

    Love it,,, serious script ya got here tristen ;}

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 9:35:00 AM

    Love theideaof camels and monkeys by theJersy shore. Makes me think the worl is truly shrinking. Great humor in this Tristen!

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 4:31:00 AM

    Simply brilliant!

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 3:08:00 PM

    ULTRA EXPRESSIVE THOUGHTS CAPTIVATE TRISTEN .. THE MOVIE SHOULD HAVE THIS PIECE AS ITS INTRODUCTION IT IS SO PERFECTLY PENNED LUV .. U R A BRILLIANT AND MASTERFUL POET LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 9:21:00 AM

    Good morning Tristen, i love it so far... hoping to come back and read this one again. xox~pd