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Carol Sunshine Brown
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Skylight Is Ablaze
skylight is ablaze
whirlwind rainbow of stars fly
Walkway through nature
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 1/11/2013 9:08:00 PM
A nice haiku.... I wish to walk through this image... very dreamy...pd
Leonora Galinta
Date: 10/23/2012 7:12:00 AM
I can picture the fantastic beauty of the sky in your awesome haiku, my dear friend Carol. So glad that I did not miss this one. Thank you so much for sharing and your warm congratulatory comments on my win. Have a wonderful time/day in sunshine always! love lots, Leonora
Juniper Lock
Date: 10/20/2012 8:12:00 PM
This is beautiful.,..,i love your haiku..JL
Debbie Duncan
Date: 10/19/2012 3:12:00 PM
I haven't got my haiku's down yet,,, though I have tried writing a few,, maybe around 30,,, have a great weekend Carol ;}
Yesha Shah
Date: 10/18/2012 4:50:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in your haiku Carol. loved the read.
bl devnath
Date: 10/17/2012 10:32:00 AM
One of the nature's secret beauty adorned wonderfully. Loved always, bl
Michael J. Falotico
Date: 10/16/2012 5:49:00 PM
Beautiful haiku Carol!!! One of my favorite forms that I have neglected lately. Luv n hugs Michael
treisha williams
Date: 10/16/2012 2:11:00 PM
beautiful.... Carol I've never done a short piece like this, i hope to try
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 10/16/2012 1:44:00 PM
Hello Carol, this is a very radiant image...,, enjoyed stopping by your poem, take care~ PD
spandan karmakar
Date: 10/14/2012 3:40:00 AM
Nice one liked this Haiku very much.......spandan
Gail DeBole
Date: 10/12/2012 8:09:00 PM
Hello Carol - I really like the unique way you describe this part of nature. - Gail
Erich Goller
Date: 10/12/2012 11:29:00 AM
Beautiful nature, beautiful Haiku poem. Thanks for sharing it.God bless you.Hugs! Erich
Justin Bordner
Date: 10/11/2012 9:17:00 PM
It can be so easy to ignore the sky; it is truly important to remember that the 'canopy of heaven is apart of nature too, the earth's, and ours! Thanks for reminding me Carol - J.A.B. %
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/11/2012 4:15:00 PM
nice to have such a scene above ones head at night! Light & love
harry horsman
Date: 10/11/2012 1:56:00 PM
awesome imagery Carol, this is so good
Hazel Connelly
Date: 10/11/2012 1:37:00 PM
I love this Carol. I've never done Haiku
Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/11/2012 1:12:00 PM
Enjoyed your very creative Haiku this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by to let me know that I placed in Russell's contest..Sara
Modupe Sefunmi
Date: 10/11/2012 6:31:00 AM
This is lovely Carol! Great, reading some of your new poems these days.
Tahera Mannan
Date: 10/11/2012 12:44:00 AM
This is beautiful. such an amazing image.
Leonora Galinta
Date: 10/10/2012 9:04:00 PM
I can see a very fantastic view here my dear friend Carol. Two thumbs up for this awesome Haiku! Thanks for stopping by and your inspiring comments. Love always, Leonora
Leonora Galinta
Date: 10/10/2012 10:24:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend for making me win in your Bio poem contest!!!
nette onclaud
Date: 10/10/2012 4:36:00 PM
such lilting energy you exude, carol.. enchanting nature 'ku!..:) huggs
Date: 10/10/2012 4:16:00 PM
This is incredible the feeling it gives the intensity is amazing.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/10/2012 3:27:00 PM
carol, this is one of your best I've seen. I just love the words and imagery in this one.
Russell Sivey
Date: 10/10/2012 3:05:00 PM
This is a delightful write my friend! I really enjoyed this wonderful piece that you have so eloquently written! Great Work!!
Jancarl Campi
Date: 10/10/2012 12:53:00 PM
I like the images here. Thanks for reading my work.
David Williams
Date: 10/10/2012 12:09:00 PM
Carol great image here, I like it...David
harry horsman
Date: 10/10/2012 10:07:00 AM
lovely scene you write here...
jack horne
Date: 10/10/2012 9:10:00 AM
beautiful haiku, Carol. Thanks very much - loved the contest : )