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Sad very sad

Sad  very sad

Wooed for years, did it
All  in the mind for more years,
Getting  together 
For the act, twin towers crashed,
When  seconds it did not last. 

10/10/2012
S.Jagathsimhan Nair
for PD's Sad Tanka

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  1. Date: 10/22/2012 3:53:00 PM

    sad indeed, Jag, and congrats for your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:57:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Jag. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 7:33:00 AM

    congrats on your win! a sad event...

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 4:29:00 PM

    CONGRATS JAG ON A HAPPY WIN FOR THIS SAD VERY SAD TANKA LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:54:00 AM

    Jag, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 4:51:00 PM

    Very good write Jag. It was also very sad. Thanks for sharing. Lucy

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 8:10:00 AM

    riveting work, jag...punchy end line; much enjoyed.. best wishes and huggs!

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 3:23:00 AM

    Good written, Jag - I like it. - Luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)