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A Snapshot in Time

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A Snapshot in Time

She could not reach out to touch him
But they were as one, through space and time
United as one soul together, understanding all
She gazed down on him in sheer wonder
This Adonis this truly beautiful embodiment of man
She could hear his breathing, feel his breath
As she silently observed him in sheer wonder and awe
And praised the heavens for this, her one true love
She gently then, like a soft breeze, placed a kiss on his lips
Sleep well my darling, dream sweet dreams she whispered 
And then with a flicker he was suddenly gone 
The moment stayed in her memory, like a snapshot in time.

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:28:00 AM
    Dreams are much better than reality.

    Treetop Avatar Lizzie Treetop
    Date: 10/24/2012 10:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Truth is stranger than fiction!
  1. Date: 10/23/2012 3:14:00 PM
    But Lizzie, there is a reality in your lines that cant be washed away. Such a beautiful rendition of a love that has no end. It is fille with a gentle wonder that begs to be explored. Love, Elizabeth

    Treetop Avatar Lizzie Treetop
    Date: 10/24/2012 10:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear sweet Elizabeth always there thank yiu for all your encouragement!
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 12:17:00 PM
    Lizzie, I like this tale of an untouchable image...David

    Treetop Avatar Lizzie Treetop
    Date: 10/24/2012 10:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Dave not untouchable but far away.Hope yiu are well!
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 1:28:00 AM
    Good morning Lizzie - Thinking of you often ... hope you doing well - - Your poems I will always admire - Many good thoughts go out to you my friend. - :) oxox love forever Anne-Lise :)

    Treetop Avatar Lizzie Treetop
    Date: 10/24/2012 10:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear Anne Lise you are also always there yiu sweet sweet lady, many good thoughts of yiu too my friend!