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Inked

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Inked

Cold, black seat
Transfixed there.	 
Mind made up
My choice I’ll bare.

Needle to wrist
Sharp point sense.	
Pain is now 
Consequence.

What is inked
Ever glows.
What it says?
Come look to know.




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  1. Date: 10/21/2012 2:46:00 PM

    Did you get your tat? I like this. Someday Ill get one.

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 5:24:00 AM

    Very interesting..it surely makes me think..JL

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 11:54:00 PM

    nice to read and imagine .simple ,short but well crafted .thank you for sharing .jk

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 9:38:00 PM

    Sounds like you got a new tattoo. Good poem - JH

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 11:40:00 AM

    It is a very good poem Monique!!! Have a lovely day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 11:03:00 AM

    Your poem is very clear....the title says it all. Enjoyed reading it...so what have you got??? (the tat I mean)

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 5:02:00 AM

    Makes perfect sense to me (plus the title is a bit of a hint!) I think its quite clever. Well done!

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 12:54:00 AM

    Should I change this? I don't want it to seem like I was trying to do myself in- I was trying to describe getting a tat on my wrist...

    Pettit Avatar Robert Pettit Date: 10/11/2012 4:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I had to read it again to determine you were describing getting a tattoo. It's much clearer to me now. If you are interested in tattoos, take a look at one of my earlier entries titled "Skin Illustrations".
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 12:38:00 AM

    Suicide is no way to run away from your problems. A better day may be just around the corner.

    brandt Avatar monique brandt Date: 10/10/2012 12:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Not suicide, tats! Wow, I didn't realize it sounded like that!