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A Better Day

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This is my first attempt of writing poetry at age 69(about 5 months ago).  I was sitting on my deck on a cloudy day and began to think of my grand daughter's smile and texted this short poem to her.  She responded the next day that she was having a long day working as a hair stylist and that the poem made her smile and made her day. 

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A Better Day

I was looking out at a dreary day

Not unlike many we have in May

I thought of your smiling face

It took me to a better place

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  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:33:00 PM
    :-) enjoying your Featured Poem of the week. take care and have yourself a great coming week. xox~ LINDA"

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 10:04:00 AM
    ALLEN, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. have a nice 4th of July. *SKAT