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WHEEZE OF A WIND

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WHEEZE OF A WIND



Chilled wind in the *metro wheezed louder, shattered The eyes and damped skin. Thistles and grass blades washed by gaping teeth and drenched. Haggard, we were troubled by piles of birds waylaid. It is frost moment once more , frost moment all along. The moon grew old too soon, bawling through a crummy *playlist of blues’ songs Like frail bowl torn. *Hunk of a wind ruled the scene. It rode far into the dark sky’s legion, an energy Fierce as tail whipping oaks and fallen spires To wager a fight. Amidst a team of man and Luna, Wild stomps of thrill reeled, and then called a ceasefire. In gentle deed , it *gassed up fresh clouds to open With pleasure. As if, in the wheeze, nothing ever happened. ~ nature ~ Contest of Cyndi Mac Millan Timeless Yet Contemporary, A Sonnet Thang By nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 3/30/2013 11:28:00 PM

    I'm happy to read this amazing write and masterpiece of yours my dear friend Nette! You're indeed a great poet! Hope you come back at soup please....You're also in my thoughts and prayers. I hope you're doing well. I'm going home this April. I hope to hear from you. You are one of the assets in this website. I know that it's not only me but everyone misses you. By the way I'm stopping by to greet you a blessed Easter Season! love and hugs, kabayan Leonora

    Galinta Avatar Leonora Galinta Date: 3/30/2013 11:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Super Belated congratulations on this! Hugs!!!
  1. Date: 10/18/2012 5:01:00 PM

    You amaze me every time Nette. I can't read fast enough to keep up with your thoughts. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 4:32:00 PM

    Awesome!!! Congrats on the win!!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 3:32:00 PM

    Like I said below--and well deserved!!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 11:12:00 AM

    Congrats on your amazing work that is a winner...Sara

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 8:24:00 AM

    WARM CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON A MARVELOUS WRITE AND WIN FOR A SUPER TOUGH CHALLENGE .. U ALWAYS ACE THEM ALL SWEETS.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 7:55:00 AM

    Such a lovely river of a sonnet. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 6:28:00 AM

    Congratulations on your 4th place win in Cyndi's contest Nette. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 8:01:00 AM

    Nette, Your poems are like one of those movies you watch that every time you see it, there's something new that you notice or feel---one of few poets here that can do that well--and though intense, so cohesive from start to finish, amazing!

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 12:15:00 PM

    Excellent contemporary Sonnet. Sure to do well Nette!

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 12:52:00 AM

    The cold wind brought an emotional storm along with it! Expression at its best, comes through your work!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 3:51:00 PM

    This is a splendid depiction of nature my friend! I really enjoyed this incredible poem Nette, the painted picture that you gave me was spectacular! You descriptions were so perfect I was amazed at their flawlessness! This piece is beautiful, what an awesome depiction of nature, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 10:11:00 AM

    Heads up onto winners' list..Good job..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..I hope it is not cold where you are but a beautiful day..Sara

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 9:21:00 AM

    Yes, Nette has written a new and beautiful poetry even today - Thumbs up for you in the contest!! - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 9:08:00 AM

    Thanks for sending the alarm that you have posted a poem;)

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 9:06:00 AM

    Great imagery here in this Sonnet Net!Beautiful poem!!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 9:04:00 AM

    Yes!!