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Dramatic Moment

"Dramatic Moment" hearts carved in oak tree love engrained on wooden bark I cried as rain crashed lover buried beneath leaves death awaits sweet rendezvous. *For Suzette Crous's Tanka - The Pivot Contest

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  1. Date: 10/10/2012 3:12:00 PM

    wow, such a heartfelt poem, enjoyed this...

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 12:05:00 PM

    Great entry for Suzette's contest. I think this has all she asked for and more. Good luck Linda.

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 10:05:00 AM

    beautiful and sad write here, my friend - sure to do well in the contest. How are your hands today? I pray for some improvement for you xx

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 3:39:00 PM

    There is a silver lining with all of this...the sweet rendezvous...when we finally meet in heaven! We must look upon the positive or we'll go crazy and we'll never be happy again! I really enjoyed your write today as I have read it this evening! I have been busy all day today and have fallen behind in my daily commenting! But I had to read yours, for your poetry has a special flair to it that I really enjoy! Thanks for sharing this clever piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 2:28:00 PM

    Truly Beautiful Linda. ~ Alicia Lorraine Mathes

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 9:10:00 AM

    A touching heartfelt tanka by you Linda.Beautifully penned.

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 8:39:00 AM

    thinking of those old romantic novels when happy endings were unfounded poets .. enjoy on this rainy day here in NJ ..luv