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You and the Moon

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You and the Moon

I complained
 To the moon, 
All I have is you 
To gaze at the sky,
 Yet 
Every time you leave me,
 With out telling me why.

 The moon responded,
 "When I leave 
I don't take my beauty,
 As 
That 
beauty is worn by 
A girl of this city.
 Look at her eyes, 
You will forget my brightness,
 You will forget my beauty."

 "You really thought 
I could be around,
 When I observe the most beautiful girl of this land?
 No one can express her beauty,
 When she appears with the cellphone in her hand."

 "I am just one color,
 Yet 
She is pink one day,
 While 
The other day she is blue."
 That is when I realized,
 The moon was
 Talking about you.

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  1. Date: 10/12/2012 9:42:00 PM
    I love this one, though the entire poem stands out, the very first verse is what gets me.

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 1:41:00 PM
    Stopping by your poetry list today to tell you thank you for your kind comments on my writing. Your comment was truly appreciated Goran. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 10:03:00 AM
    I adore this Goran, so sweet and lovely - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)