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Remembering my Childhood

I remember being a child and looking into the sky
With my best friend by my side, we spread our wings and fly
Over the gardens and over the hills
Imagination soaring, my young mind it fills

We examined the bugs and their dark shells
The birds that flew when we ran or yelled
The softness of the grass when we were out of breath
And the small berries surrounded by a thorny belt

I remember the comfort of my friends furry head
Her wet nose nudging me in the side
Urging me to imagine, to close my eyes
To once again spread wings and take flight

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  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:06:00 AM

    Beautifully written. Congratulations on the win.

    Hughes Avatar William Hughes Date: 12/10/2012 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:03:00 AM

    wow, what an imaginative pet poem thinking of yourself flying because of being with the pet dog. This is so sweet. Congrats on your creative poem's win.

    Hughes Avatar William Hughes Date: 12/10/2012 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:01:00 AM

    Big Congratulations on your winning spot William xx

    Hughes Avatar William Hughes Date: 12/10/2012 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 12/8/2012 3:22:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem - thanks for the nice contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Hughes Avatar William Hughes Date: 12/10/2012 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 8:48:00 PM

    William, , CONGRATULATIONS :-) ON YOUR XOOL WINNING pet poem.. always~LINDA

    Hughes Avatar William Hughes Date: 12/10/2012 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 7:01:00 PM

    thanks 4 the support~LUV~SKAT

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 2:46:00 AM

    Take care of all good memories - good poem. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 2:00:00 AM

    I was right up there with you! What fun you made me recall! Fine job! Cheers! Victoria