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Stay away from me
Our good times have gone away
Cheaters never win
Come on sing me a sad song
So I can laugh, while you cry
Written for: "Tanka"me" a sad song Contest Sponsored by: ~P.D.~ Written by: Carol Brown 6th Place Winner

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  1. Date: 8/3/2013 7:16:00 AM

    And winners never cheat! I love it.

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:11:00 PM

    yes.. a wonderful win in my contest... sad i must say...pd

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 7:40:00 AM

    Carol....this write is judicious! Love it! Congrats on your win! Hugs

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 2:34:00 PM

    Good write.... Seems that you'v won - Trevor

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:23:00 AM

    One of the most painful words to hear for me is "Good bye". It was such a perfect topic chosen for the theme and form my dear friend. My big congratulations on your awesome win! love/hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 4:43:00 AM

    Congratulations on your fine win Carol xx

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 3:49:00 PM

    Way to go in PD's contest a well deserved win for you, carol.

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 12:35:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win friend Carol :) I can relate to your poem (^_^) nice tanka!!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:52:00 AM

    Thank you all for the comments and congrats. They are always appreciated. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 9:11:00 AM

    Carol many congrats on your win...great write!!!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Congrats on another win with this one!

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 4:18:00 PM


  1. Date: 10/21/2012 2:40:00 PM

    great job Carol, congrats on your win

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:51:00 AM

    Carol, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 8:22:00 AM

    I like the anger in this - nicely done! good luck in the contest :)

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 5:43:00 AM

    This is so touching! loved it!

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 9:36:00 AM

    intriguing lines!

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 12:24:00 AM

    very nice,,,, I like it Carol ;}

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 7:59:00 PM

    Bye- Bye indeed, a very nice expressed Tanka, Thanks for sharing it, God bless you. Hugs! Erich

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 10:50:00 AM

    I see you got on top of the twist here Carol Thank you for your kind comment on my Poems feature.."

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 5:58:00 AM

    Just rewards! Great Tanka... tanka you very much! LOL Hugs, happy thoughts and much love, Jack xox

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 11:06:00 PM

    Yes, this is GREAT.

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 5:49:00 PM

    Nailed it! And funny, really nice.

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 2:56:00 PM

    Yeah Carol. Cheaters never win. Nicely pen'd!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 1:00:00 AM

    A beautiful tanka poem my dear friend, Carol. I can feel the sadness here , a feeling which is asked in the contest. Sure winner for me. Good luck always my dear friend! love and hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 12:08:00 AM

    Lovely Carol. All the best for the contest.

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 8:53:00 PM

    Wowsers! Absolutely beautiful verse! Thanks for sharing Always, Laura

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 6:55:00 PM

    I would like to hear this played to a country music tune Carol, enjoyed your read tonight, have a nice evening hugs vie

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 6:53:00 PM

    nicely penned wishes... love...Joseph

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 6:52:00 PM

    Wow, this is quite a very powerful write! I really enjoyed the twist you took me on with the, "So I can laugh, while you cry" line! What an awesome write my friend, Great Work!!