Evil Web by craig cornish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2012 3:50:00 PM

congratulations again, Craig. I remember this fine tanka.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2012 5:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "TANKA ME" contest Craig. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 10/24/2012 4:05:00 AM

CONGRATS CRAIG ON THIS COOL AND CLEVER WRITE AND AWESOME WIN FOR TRUTHFUL LINES LUV ..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/23/2012 7:12:00 PM

CRAIG, congratulations with your "Tanka me this, Tanka me that, Tanka me any poem you want :-) LOL.... what a title.. Love it and enjoyed stopping by all my sisters tanka winners... good night... LUV~PD

Leonora Galinta

Date: 10/23/2012 3:39:00 PM

My big congratulations on your win, Craig! hugs:)LG

Ruben O.

Date: 10/23/2012 2:48:00 PM

A six line tanka!! : ) Congratulations on your win, Craig. I read your comment below...no comments. Ruben

S. K. A. T.

Date: 10/23/2012 2:15:00 PM

C, Congrats on your win' luv * Siddy

Suzette Crous

Date: 10/11/2012 8:37:00 AM

Good point. We in South Africa are what we call Democratic Communists.... now there is a contradiction in terms, if you ever want one. Furthermore, the poor is robbing the destitute to pay the rich. No lie :-) Love, Su

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2012 2:44:00 PM

HI, Craig. I enjoy this although I know you and I differ on things politically. I happen to think a little bit of socialistic democracy is not all that bad! I'm getting so tired of seeing the rich get richer and the poor getting poorer. (anyway, it's a very fine line and a good balance is really needed).

craig cornish Date: 10/10/2012 3:38:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I was actually referring to other countries in South America and the Middle East that say they're democracies but are certainly not. Your feelings are safe within this write.--Luv Ya

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/9/2012 6:20:00 PM

just to help hon depending on who this is for it may or may not matter..tanka was usually a love poem and you want at least the last two lines to be very personal / don't rhyme.. hmmm ex: [I feel the evil/those who think they are free/burgers eating pump jocks/ three jobs to feed the brood/baby mama's in the house] see? much more personal SUBJECTIVE..full of blood not anticeptic? XXXXOOO Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/9/2012 6:21:00 PM

I know I didn't do a love verse but how to make yours about love?

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