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In the middle of Haze

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In the middle of Haze

In the middle of haze,I once fell on the ground.
Someone caught me,
They were your arms,Your grace
In the middle of haze I wish I had never seen your face.

I was trying to pull you out of my head,
Or i was going to get my heart dead.
But i gave up my glorious days,
And in the middle of haze I wish I had never seen your face.

You were an angel from heaven,You were a devil from hell.
You were an unopened book that had nothing to tell.
But i followed you without any clue or trace,
And in the middle of haze I wish I had never seen your face


You were my life,my lover,my friend
To our kingdom there was going to be no end.
But Suddenly everything blew into space.
And in the middle of haze I wish I had never seen your face.

My pride was tattered,My dreams fell apart
I know you betrayed me,I know this in my heart
But your are the guilty so why should my soul blaze?
And in the middle of haze I wish I had never seen your face

Dieing happily takes good past,
Some memories fade,some may last.
But even in your grave my soul will chase,
And in the middle of haze I wish had never seen your face

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  1. Date: 9/28/2013 12:10:00 PM
    PS...thank you for the lovely comment.. about your poem.. amazing imagery and raw imagery... sometimes we wish not to face what takes from the love we give... thanks for this deep write... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 12:08:00 PM
    Hi Sidra, a late late late, 2012 ,WELCOME to poetry soup:-) :-) Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. Maybe you will stick around. Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 12:23:00 PM
    Welcome you to the P-Soup. - Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. - You write very well Sidra. - Wish you luck. - Give comments and get comments. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Firdous Avatar Sidra Firdous
    Date: 11/17/2012 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks lisa..thanks a lot for appreciating =)
  1. Date: 10/15/2012 5:03:00 AM
    Very well written Sidra! You've brought out the themes of love and betrayal well. I love your use of refrain to show the emotional impact caused by the betrayal. Nice!

    Firdous Avatar Sidra Firdous
    Date: 10/15/2012 2:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    aww thanks dear =)
  1. Date: 10/9/2012 5:01:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sidra. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

    Firdous Avatar Sidra Firdous
    Date: 10/9/2012 9:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh thanku u ma'am..thats really sweet of u..thank U=)
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 3:11:00 PM
    wonderfully written girl,loved it,great write Sidra

    Firdous Avatar Sidra Firdous
    Date: 10/8/2012 3:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you sir =)