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in a tipsy frame of mind

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in a tipsy frame of mind

   "in a tipsy frame of mind"



my pen point was swirling and twirling to be
on a romantic adventure so fun and fancy free
with a tipsy turn here and with savoir faire' there
escaping to the Poetry Palace swimming for a "pen-mate" mare.

lo! and behold! being drunk with emotion
my pen jumped a dive in word-infested ocean
it rolled and it stretched; back strokes, as it fetched
on it's clip, hung by hook, the word "love" was etched.

my pen was so excited as another invited
in a drunken stupor, would love be unrequited?
as the black and gold form grew all toasty and warm
came face to face as a SHARPIE did swarm.

the moral is simple:  when the love bug soon soars
beware! of the SHARPIE whose inks bolder than yours!


*For Joann Grisetti's Drunken Pen 2 ...

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  1. Date: 3/13/2014 2:57:00 AM

    ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 9:50:00 AM

    I have seen drunken man and never seen drunken pen before but just now seen of yours. It's a matter of acute realization and art of expression, you have done nicely, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 6:31:00 AM

    *.* Big Smile & You Are Sooo Amazing With Your Beauty's Rap Tap Tap Whirlwind Swirl Upbeats Tempo, My Dear Fascinating Sweeet, Precious & Priceless, Beautiful LindaMarie ˜ I Was Reminded Of These Wonderful Absolute Truths Within Your Beauty's First Stanza & Oh How Fortuned To Be Blessed As Viewing Such Magnificent Gifted Poetry & Even More So, Its Silver Swans Majestic Poetess ˜ In Re This Piece In Beauties Art; I Love Love Too & Yesss, There's Always A Darker Marker Ect., Etc. ˜ My Love, Tris*

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 3:34:00 PM

    This is a simply awesome write my friend, I truly love each exciting line that you have written within this glamorous poem! So are the sharpie and the pen married yet, and if they are, who was invited to their wedding? Just having a little fun as you presented a lot of fun within your write Linda-Marie! This is a wondrous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 2:43:00 PM

    Oh this is so different from you, yet the magic is there just the same as always

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 2:06:00 PM

    What a fun poem Linda Marie, It should do well in the contest. I hope all is well with you. Hugs Anne

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 10:23:00 AM

    having some fun today with this contest poets .. better than getting angry and frustrated over poems unsble to be seen or read to comment on other than blank screens .. hope TPS fixes soon .. luv ..