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I'll Let You See

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I'll Let You See

I'll let you see.
For you  will blind me,
As you watch the heart of the young and old.
By one,by two,by three.
I'll let you see.
You will steal me,
May you have  possessiveness of others feeling.
By four,by five,by six.
I'll let you see.
And you will guild me to the light ,
To fall and fall but never be hurt.
By seven,by eight,by nine,and ten
I'll let you see.
For you shall bind an blind me, 
I've written my  will.
Watching the heart of the young and old, 
Just for the sake of there minds and your heart.

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  1. Date: 12/25/2012 3:50:00 AM
    I am always touched by the artist in you.... trying and always fighting to escape the language bonds that try, unsuccessfully, to hold you from creating beautiful work. Just to see your valiant spirit emerge victoriusly is worth the read... I covet your courage..... Jake