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Love n Lost

I met and known
Merry Merry, Oh!! Merry
I dance, I sing, I laugh
Beautiful world!!

What was that bang?
What's that hole underneath?
I bleed but don't see.
Oh!! now I see, I bleed white
Did you touch me?

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  1. Date: 10/15/2012 4:24:00 AM

    Lovely write Roland! I love they way you asked 'Did you touch me?' - it shows the uncertainty that comes with love. And loss is never easy. Nice!

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 11:33:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this afternoon Roland. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 9:24:00 AM

    I feel you bro,no I didn't touch you,you touched me,so true,Roland,welcome to the Soup with a bang,read and comment and others will do the same,enjoy