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Almost

I didn’t see this coming

My 4 eyes didn’t heed the warnings

Gale force desires
A stroking of fingertips and butterfly kisses
Against our new epiphany

I didn’t intend to become a lullaby
Laced in Spanish dialects and wanton emptiness

I only wanted to hold her hand.

She knew I was a gamer,
But not of the mind

I didn’t want to claim her, before I knew her.

My skeletons had combusted in defeat

Afraid
Wondering

If I could make her smile,
But I couldn’t make her think,
Would she remember me tomorrow?

Because I don’t have a degree
Laminated in formulas and brainiac dreams

But, dive into my skin
And you will savor my chemistry

Here I am
An uplifting self-confidence slow dancing on this floor

But, I am just a 13 year old boy hoping she will have this dance. 

Because
Despite popular belief
I am not fine

I was almost in the clear

Poking fun at misguided infatuations
Impulsively torn off-white pantyhose
Ready to milk the satin off her inner thighs

Yet, it is I
Wandering afternoon streets
Placing another flower against street bench’s last laugh 

I was almost in the clear

Setting free her unchained melody
Didn’t see a forthcoming pain
Saturday nights, no longer the same

My mornings are still of you
A drop of dew
Dangling from emerald green edges

An unfulfilled smile
Waving from a distance
As I let you, respectfully, be

I didn’t want to become an almost lullaby
Nor a sportsmanlike high-five

But, with my head up to the sun
In exosphere memories
Shedding my ozone layers

I play these drums in sync with my heartbeat,
Almost

©Drake J. Eszes

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  1. Date: 10/19/2012 3:15:00 PM

    This poem has the notes and lyrics as a song. Your writing seems very musical, is it a major influence in your life?

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 10/19/2012 3:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You know I never looked at this particular piece as a song. I might have to now that you mention it. But, yes, music is in my blood and fully drives how I live & think each day. Thank you so very much!
  1. Date: 10/18/2012 7:02:00 PM

    A very passionate verse...I say divine! How wonderful you felt so free to be honest in this treasure given in poetry. Cynthia

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 10/18/2012 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Cynthia!!! That's very awesome & kind of you to say! I truly appreciate that. :) Thank you.
  1. Date: 10/17/2012 1:52:00 PM

    Drake, almost is good, its better almost getting there, than not even making it pass the games one plays, .. maybe the next few dances, will make it all clear.... Thank you for sharing your wonderfulness through poetry, take care :-) PD

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 10/17/2012 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes. Being fortunate enough for it to even happen is even better. Yes, maybe it will...thank you for stopping by PD! :)
  1. Date: 10/15/2012 7:05:00 PM

    well written! One does have to learn to zip it up! Playing with fire gets one burned.... eventually! :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 10/15/2012 11:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Heh, indeed. Thank you kindly! :)
  1. Date: 10/9/2012 5:43:00 PM

    interesting write..

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 10/15/2012 11:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks! :)
  1. Date: 10/9/2012 9:13:00 AM

    what a lyrical write, drake.. so heartfelt from beginning to end; this goes deeper than at first glance... beautifully woven together!..:) hugggs!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 10/9/2012 9:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You're very kind. And, yes, it does...thank you, Nette! :)
  1. Date: 10/9/2012 8:24:00 AM

    Drake you have a way to rise above with every write of yours I read you take with on this marvelous journey. I really enjoyed this beauty :) Wilma

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 10/9/2012 9:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Rising above, while never forgetting, is a must. I do appreciate this, Wilma. :) Thank you.
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 10:00:00 AM

    almost. it's a sad story, drake. But you have written of your inner feelings in an exquisite way. Beautiful poem. hugs, Catie )

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 10/9/2012 9:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I did what I could. :) Thank you as always, Catie.