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Waiting for the rejoining of hearts I pray for my death

Look in my eyes and you can see I’m lost

Losing you forever was truly a great cost

Tears of sadness is my drowning dammed river

The cold of separation makes my soul shiver

Faded memories surround me of once love’s joy

A glimpse of hope and fate I often do destroy

Waking hours of faith are often surly kind

Dreaming of the past I wish now would rewind

To live again life with my worlds only friend

How can I survive the heartbreak until the bitter end

Existing in your scent with every painful breath

Waiting for the rejoining of hearts I pray for my death


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  1. Date: 10/18/2012 12:24:00 PM

    If only more people developed this magnitude of devotion for their sovereign rights - I respect your unique use of grammer, very efficient, and necessitating craftmanship on behalf of the reader to comprehend - a pleasent challenge - J.A.B. %

    Clark Avatar Kevin Clark Date: 10/18/2012 3:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Justin for your comments. Please let me know if any of my other poems stir any other feelings.
  1. Date: 10/11/2012 6:50:00 PM

    I can feel a deep and painful scar in the words you write Kevin. Since we write what is in our hearts, I can only surmise it is real. I hope you know that time may not erase but will surely soften pain, and new love can be found in unexpected places. I will be looking for that moment! Love Elizabeth

    Clark Avatar Kevin Clark Date: 10/12/2012 5:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Elizabeth. Im actually fine but because you felt the pain that makes me happy.