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siting in the dark

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siting in the dark

im siting in this dark corner on my bed just crying 
i feel so sad and alone 
i rather stay in my dark room instead of  places full of light 
im scarried of the future and the past 
i dont know why i cry so much  
i just like the darkness 
siting in this darkness thinking is there some 1 out there that cares that is thinking of me who wants or am i just alone with no one 
im scaried today if i die would any 1  care i would hope so im just so sad and rather sit here in the dark.........

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  1. Date: 10/11/2012 1:27:00 PM
    This makes me feel sad for you..Sara

    guillen Avatar diann guillen
    Date: 10/11/2012 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    sorry i was tryn to put that comment on some one elses but pleease dont be sad for me i will be okay
    guillen Avatar diann guillen
    Date: 10/11/2012 1:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 1:50:00 AM
    Sentimentally speaking, the poem captures ones mind pityingly, that words "scared of light" brings nothing in mind, except that, this poem is a dark one, there is nothing in the dark but death, light brings life. Cry not alone..... For somebody at the other side is really ready to help you out..... Cheer!

    guillen Avatar diann guillen
    Date: 10/11/2012 1:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thhank you
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 8:23:00 AM
    A powerful sadness. As Vicky said, which I concur, soak in the light. Good lines, Diann.

    guillen Avatar diann guillen
    Date: 10/11/2012 1:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 2:05:00 AM
    Poignant write this! Darkness and despair seem to go hand in hand. Only when we soak in the light do we start seeing things from different perspectives. Nicely written!

    guillen Avatar diann guillen
    Date: 10/11/2012 1:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you