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the wake

a boat passes by

dark ripple left in its wake

the only mar on

aqua blue ocean like glass

...  its trail stands out to the eye

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  1. Date: 10/8/2012 12:26:00 AM

    Very nice, Francine. typo for it's. I can't decide which of your tankas I love most.

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 10:04:00 PM

    They are just like the vapor trails left by jet engines in the sky. Another good tanka.