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tears

 an ocean of tears
drowns my brokenhearted soul
floating on despair
the wings of love fly away
my wistful heart seeks solace


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  1. Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 10/23/2012 4:44:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your fine win Joseph xx
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/22/2012 3:51:00 PM
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    Very nicely done and won!! congratulations!
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    Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/22/2012 12:40:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win friend Joseph.. like it :)
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 10/22/2012 11:53:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Joseph. Love, Carol XXXX
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    Jonas L. Rozario
    Date: 10/22/2012 9:13:00 AM
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    Awesome Joseph...many congrats on your win!!!
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    Black Eyed Susan
    Date: 10/22/2012 7:22:00 AM
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    aww... congrats on your win with this sad piece!
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 10/21/2012 4:20:00 PM
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    CONGRATS JOSEPH FOR A BIG WIN WITH THIS EMOTIONAL TANKA LUV ..
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    Francine Roberts
    Date: 10/21/2012 2:42:00 PM
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    beautifully penned, congrats on your win in the contest
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 10/21/2012 11:52:00 AM
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    Joseph, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD
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    Juniper Lock
    Date: 10/20/2012 9:01:00 PM
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    Lovely Joseph! JL
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    elizabeth wesley
    Date: 10/11/2012 4:48:00 PM
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    Nurse fuzzy here to comfort you! When you reach bottom there's nowhere to go but up so don't give up hope.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/10/2012 3:02:00 PM
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    STill waiting on a new poem, my friend!! Happy WEdnesday!
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 10/10/2012 2:13:00 PM
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    Stopping by your poetry list today to tell you thank you for your kind comments on my writing. Your comment was truly appreciated Joseph. Love, Carol
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    harry horsman
    Date: 10/10/2012 10:26:00 AM
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    Hi Joseph, this is very profound, and so sad... very well written....
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    SCRIBE ML
    Date: 10/9/2012 9:34:00 AM
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    I love the true emotions intertwined with imagery. Nicely penned! Thanks for stopping by with the well wishes!
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 10/9/2012 8:01:00 AM
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    An emotive work..Sorry that you are brokenhearted..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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    Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/8/2012 1:25:00 PM
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    A sad but beautifully written tanka, my friend... kudos! Thanks for sharing!
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    Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 10/8/2012 1:42:00 AM
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    NICELY done Joseph! Love the imagery!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/8/2012 12:45:00 AM
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    GREAT tanka, Joseph. One of the best of ones I have seen about tears and sadness!!!
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    Goran Rahim
    Date: 10/7/2012 4:50:00 PM
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    very deep tanka, well done.


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