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All My Colors Fade to Blue When I'm Without You

From your head all the way down to your toes, you are as sweet as a nice red rose. I love you for everything you do. I don't know why. There's just something about you. When you leave me, all my colors fade to blue. Believe me, the love I have for you is true. Inspired by another member's poem

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  1. Date: 10/7/2012 7:27:00 PM

    soup mail

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 5:41:00 PM

    very sweet poem, much enjoyed

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 4:27:00 PM

    great poem Robert

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 4:18:00 PM

    Great work..Its got good rhyme and rhythm..I am sure that the person that you wrote this one far will appreciate you penning the lines for her..Thanks for stopping by my work about the hunter..Yes, I believe when we die that our spirit goes to meet with God...Sara

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick Date: 10/7/2012 4:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I written some poor, some fair, and some that were very good works..I need to go in and pull my worst and rewrite or just eliminate them..Sara