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free cee IF YOU LOOK AT THIS CAREFULLY U WILL FIND THE WORD SHE USED fiascal

IF YOU SEARCH CAREFULLY YOU WILL FIND THE WORD “FIASCO” HIDDEN 
                                    SOMEWHERE WITHIN THIS POEM

She was a maze that led me to amazement
A labyrinth that led to love
She was a puzzle with ill-fitting pieces
She was everything and all of the above

She was laughter at a party and the icing on a cake
She was Christmas presents and a raise in pay
She was a statue of statuesque proportions pleasing to the eye
She was all these things until she opted away

She was just so god-damned stupid
But my god she was so damned cute
She was just such a god-damned liar
One who set afire to my desire

She had wings akin to a mast and its sail
And no angel ever flew any higher
The time we spent together was spent amidst neon colors 
A temptress of whom I would never tire

She was just so god-damned funny
She recounted jokes to me expediently
But the lady was seriously unfunny in bed
And alas, after bed her joke would be on me

She was just such a god-damned liar
And as for truth I never knew where a damned clue hid
She was just as hot as that old Lake Of Fire
But holy sh*t the babe was so damned stupid
                                              © 2009…..free cee!

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  1. Date: 10/7/2012 3:27:00 PM

    You never cease to amaze me Jeffry, it's like your struggling inside, your hunger for intellectual beauty shines through in this poem, though the beauty that your eye beholds, is never missed on you, I wish you both in one anima mundu, across the miles, I'm thinking of you and smiling, love vie.xxx