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NOT IN LOVE

Not in love? he asked
Over and over again
There was a silence

Indignant towards her
Not in love? he asked again

Leaning towards her
Over the dinner table
Vacant look on her face
Evident that she meant every word.

Hazel

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  1. Date: 10/11/2012 2:06:00 PM

    Ouch! That must have hurt him. I guess the vacant look conveyed all he needed to hear. Nicely written Hazel!

    Connelly Avatar Hazel Connelly Date: 10/11/2012 2:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Vicky.
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 9:09:00 AM

    she didn't even blink,lol,great write Hazel,lol yep she's serious

    Connelly Avatar Hazel Connelly Date: 10/8/2012 11:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ha, ha, that's right Richard.