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Halloween Night II - Re-write

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Halloween Night II - Re-write

Halloween Night II

I swear, those warlocks haven't a clue;
they set their sights on Halloween night.
It's then, they'll sample the witches brew.

Inside the circle's, a different view;
some will think it's a beautiful sight.
I swear, those warlocks haven't a clue.

Flowers in our hair, and eyes so blue;
gold on our wrists will shine in the light.
It's then, they'll sample the witches brew.

Scarves on our hips and toes painted, too;
we'll be dancing around the firelight.
I swear, those warlocks haven't a clue.

Jasmine in the air sets minds askew,
as they step into the light, so white.
It's then, they'll sample the witches brew.

Our skin is covered with morning dew,
we'll take them, then, to a frenzied height.
I swear, those warlocks haven't a clue,
it's then, they'll sample the witches brew.

By: Catie LIndsey
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Halloween Night II- RE-Write

 Wizards  and warlocks have no notion
As witches begin brewing on Halloween night
Soon they'll taste the witches  potion

Inside the  cauldron  of their emotions
Many succumb to vampire  bites
Wizards  and warlocks have no notion

Bat eating Zombies  spring into motion
as the winged creature fly into the light
Soon they'll taste the witches potion

Ghouls and goblins  start a commotion
as we dance around the fire bright
Wizards  and warlocks have no notion

Witches add jasmine to their  magic concoction
As wizards and warlocks  come into sight
Soon  they'll taste the witches potion

As  moonlight glimmers upon the ocean
We'll give them  all  a bit of a fright
Wizards  and warlocks have no notion
Soon they'll taste the witches potion

By: Joseph May

contest name:  Re-write one of my poems
sponsor: Catie Lindsey





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  1. Date: 10/23/2012 6:19:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Catie's "Re-Write" contest Joseph. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:50:00 AM
    An excellent write Joseph, congratulations on your win in Catie's contest. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 10:09:00 AM
    Congratulations friend Joseph on your win..hugs!!

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 9:25:00 PM
    Joseph, congratulations with your win...pd

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 8:23:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Joseph May! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 12:59:00 PM
    Congrats Joseph..One love, Joy Wells

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 10/20/2012 5:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Joy
  1. Date: 10/20/2012 12:37:00 PM
    congrats JOSEPH ON WINNING AN HM FOR YOUR AMAZING RE-WRITE OF CATIE'S POEM LUV .. CONGRATS ..

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 10/20/2012 5:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Linda
  1. Date: 10/20/2012 7:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win, Joseph. Love, Su

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 10/20/2012 5:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Suzette
  1. Date: 10/20/2012 6:38:00 AM
    Very nice, Joseph. I think this might have placed higher if it weren't so much like my own. But I did enjoy it anyway. Congratulations on your win in my re-write contest. hugs, Catie :)

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 10/20/2012 5:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Catie....glad I was able to place in your contest...
  1. Date: 10/9/2012 12:45:00 PM
    Splendid rewrite... you made everything fit so well! Terry (good luck in the contest)

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 10/9/2012 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much Terry
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 2:21:00 PM
    how cute, the way you changed the main words brew and clue for potion and notion. WEll done!!

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 10/8/2012 4:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much Andrea