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Love and Marriage

Love and Marriage


Marriage without love
Love-making  should make it work.
Love without marriage
Love-making could make it slip.
Big  questions  of make and break.


07/oct/2012

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  1. Date: 10/23/2012 5:43:00 PM

    Creative idea..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:07:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem in SandyIvy's "Tanka-Love & Marriage" contest Jag. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 9:54:00 PM

    S J, congrats luv*Siddy

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 8:43:00 PM

    Congratulations on your awesome win, SJ! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 8:07:00 PM

    CONGRATS JAG ON WINNING AN HM WITH THIS DYNAMIC TANKA ON THEME LUV.

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 3:54:00 PM

    enjoy your win' Sandy

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 8:25:00 AM

    Very philosophical! Love this, Jas. Su

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 9:23:00 AM

    we gotta mix both love and marriage for a grreat blend!.. lovely, jag. you pulled me in!..:)

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:35:00 AM

    oh YES, this is CLEVER.

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:01:00 AM

    Well written piece. Made me think. Michael

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 7:55:00 AM

    Marriage without love - must be like soup without salt. Like it Jag, well written. - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)