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Whispered Foreplay


A whisper, is my lover's breath. Molten silk I can't ignore, steals soft along my waiting flesh. Sets flame to a need for more. A whisper, from my lover's lips. a tease of passion promise. Angelic prose it does eclipse. To all else, oblivious. A whisper, comes my lover's touch, stolen and so illicit. A butterfly wing, fleeting brush. To my core I am torch lit.

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  1. Date: 10/6/2012 11:18:00 PM

    Wow, Paula. it's on fire!!! what a GREAT poem . I'm glad I caught it by being here tonight at the new poems by poets list!

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 10:37:00 PM

    A wonderful poem Paula and love how it rhymes perfectly. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 9:37:00 PM

    Not only does this write rhyme masterfully but it has a perfect meter with it! I really enjoyed the creativity you exude with this powerful poem! What a piece, Great Work!!

    Swanson Avatar Paula Swanson Date: 10/6/2012 9:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Russell. This was a poem that refused to die. No matter how many walls and dead ends I ran into...It kept breathing new life, with each line that came to me.