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Drunken pen

Drunken pen, follow thy drunken finger
Letting it bleed what it feels, for my heart 
It no longer feels, nor my eyes cry
My tears are lost in the trees 
My mind so drunken confuse and scramble
Hurt emotions fall with the rain
My tongue stuck under a rock, for what can I say

Drunken pen, follow thy drunken finger
Letting it bleed what it feels, for my heart 
It no longer feels, nor my eyes cry
My spirit is floating in the river
My soul is trapped in dreams
Hurt emotions fall with the rain
Feet stuck in quicksand, for I can no longer walk

Drunken pen, follow thy drunken finger
Letting it bleed what it feels, for my heart
It no longer feels, nor my eyes cry
My tears and spirit are lost in the trees, and floating in the river
My mind and soul are confuse,scramble and trapped in dreams
Hurt emotions fall with the rain, I cry each and every day
My tongue so sore, I no longer speak
My feet so weak, I no longer walk

Drunken pen, follow thy drunken finger
Letting it bleed what it feels, for my heart
No longer feels, what you want it to feel

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  1. Date: 10/20/2012 12:12:00 PM
    Delilah big congrats for a big win. one love, Joy Wells

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:22:00 PM
    Delilah, congratulations with your awesome win in the "Drunken Pen Round 2 " contest.....love the way you hold your pen. good night :-) xox PD

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 4:45:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Drunken Pen" contest Delilah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 1:26:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Delilah. Su

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 9:06:00 AM
    Delilah, you have penned a wonderful verse here. Your style captures each drunken line, I love it. Best to you in the contest, I'm sure this will place high~ Caryl