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Below is the poem entitled Lost Sense which was written by poet John Boyle. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Lost Sense

Amidst the doom days...Of her passing...
Mourns rivalry....Against wind scornfulness...
Swept abreast... Fields shedding weep...
No longer could the drums beat loud enough..
To silken ~ The grave face of sudden lost..
Whilst no longer... Did the future shed meaning..
Nor did the present or past ~ Serve sense...

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  1. Date: 12/28/2012 1:13:00 PM
    John, congratulations with your poem featured on this awesome endings week of 2012. Wishing you the best of 2013 to come... luv * Linda

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 1:52:00 PM
    Every line has the ability to be a verse, plumping this up would aid the reader in understanding. Light & Love

    Boyle Avatar John Boyle
    Date: 11/28/2012 8:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Opps.. Not a poet... lol not not a poem... :)
    Boyle Avatar John Boyle
    Date: 11/28/2012 8:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much... Truth is I am not a poem nor do I really know anything about the proper way to write.. I just toss out a few mumbles now and then... And let people ( if they have the time) read and come up with their own meanings of it... lol... Have a great day... Take care