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Engulfing sadness

So gross is the scene
Scattered tears of bleeding heart
Heart stabbed and deceived
My strength of bearing pain,sapped
Lurking in oblivion
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Empty handed life
Drags me on a fiery path
Smiles snatched from the face
Destiny showed no mercy
Engulfed me in a dark shroud

for PD's contest

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  1. Date: 10/22/2012 3:54:00 PM

    Irfana, I'm glad to see you on the winners list with this one that I remember well. Congrats!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Irfana. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:04:00 AM

    congrads on your win Irfana..

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 7:34:00 AM

    congrats on your win! depressing piece...

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 4:33:00 PM

    CONGRATS IRFANA ON A FABULOUS TANKA AND WIN LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:54:00 AM

    Irfana, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 12:44:00 AM

    YOu did a good job for portraying sadness, Irfana. Good luck in PD's contest.