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A sad song

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A sad song

unbridled passions
swirl rapidly like whirl winds
piercing through my heart
amplifying my sadness
as I drown in misty eyes

silent serenades
swept under the friendship cloak
poking saline wounds
obscuring past escapades
as pretense imitates life

guilty touches
born from a need to connect
harshly thrust aside
mounting my lonely despair
life … an effaced inscription.

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  1. Date: 10/31/2012 3:42:00 PM

    Revealing...nice, Vicky! Jimbo

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:06:00 AM

    Wow...for your first, you went all out !! This just flows so well !! Enjoyed reading and congrats on your winning spot !!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 4:53:00 PM

    congrats on your win with this attempt,Vicky....Continue to write and fly...

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:59:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Vicky. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 7:35:00 AM

    congrats on your win! a sad song indeed...

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 4:36:00 PM


  1. Date: 10/21/2012 4:27:00 PM

    splendid write Vicky.......congrats on your win

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:55:00 AM

    Vicky, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 2:30:00 AM

    Hey Vicky, wow I love your style! you communicate your feelings very well. I love your imaged specially the one of the serenades swept under friendship the cloak. Keep it up!! Omneya

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 2:37:00 PM

    amazing tanka, I love the structure of the poem, I adore the style and i feel the pain in it. wonderful job.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 11:59:00 PM

    It fits the description, sweetie. a sad set of tankas and I am sure it will be on the winners' list.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 2:18:00 PM

    A Sad Song, Nice poem Vicky.

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 8:40:00 AM

    I was having a happy Monday morning until I read your poet... LOL Well written with much emotion! Hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 6:30:00 AM

    Vicky ,I bow to your thought. Nice poem you have here.

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 5:31:00 AM

    When a poet reaches Down deep like this it is amazing what spills on paper. Amazing piece!! Big hugs Michael

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 5:30:00 AM

    Sad Song, A wonderful one Vicky- its unfortunate I may not be in a position to read all your lovely poems given the fact that I have a very bad setting(I have to come to a cyber cafe for me to go online.) I am unemployed and I have to trek for some kilometers before I get to the market center. Otherwise I had found difficulty entering any contest but I am glad I have. Love, Samson

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 4:02:00 AM

    This touched my heart. Deep. Very nice!

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 12:10:00 AM

    wow, you really gave a sad one for her contest. GREAT work!!!

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 5:09:00 AM

    Yes, this was really a sad song Vicky. - You have a first prize poem here - Good luck in the contest - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 4:10:00 AM

    Wow...Very touching write here Vicky.Love this.

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 4:09:00 AM

    i am first here!!

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 10/6/2012 1:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ha! LOL!