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About This Poem

love's hypnosis


You have shaped my heart
With a tender gentleness
Now it beats for you.
A ravishment of senses
As I weave dreams around you.




For Skat's contest.

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  1. cornish Avatar
    craig cornish
    Date: 10/25/2012 8:39:00 PM
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    Yasmin, Belated congrats on your well deserved win!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/24/2012 3:34:00 PM
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    wow, Yasmin, I think I missed this one somehow. GREAT job. And GREAT win. Congratulations.
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 10/24/2012 5:36:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "TANKA ME" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 10/24/2012 3:43:00 AM
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    CONGRATS YASMIN ON A STUNNING WRITE AND STELLAR FIRST PLACE WIN LUV ..
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 10/23/2012 7:06:00 PM
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    Hi Yasmin, congratulations with your "Tanka me this, Tanka me that, Tanka me any poem you want :-) LOL.... what a title.. Love it and enjoyed stopping by all my sisters tanka winners... good night... LUV~PD
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 10/23/2012 2:52:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your super win, Yasmin! love/hugs:) LG
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    S. K. A. T.
    Date: 10/23/2012 2:09:00 PM
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    Congrats on your win' luv * Siddy
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 10/23/2012 2:03:00 PM
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    Kudos on your awesome first place, Yasmin!! Ruben.
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 10/10/2012 12:21:00 PM
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    Yas...this is sugary sweet like you and a little mushy too! good luck.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/7/2012 11:14:00 AM
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    this one I like even better. VERY nice. I gotta get busy!!!
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    Justin Bordner
    Date: 10/7/2012 12:11:00 AM
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    A devotion worth a thousand lifetimes of travail; dreams always love their source Yasmin - you have such tremendous talent for poetic brevity - I know I can trust your beauty - J.A.B. %
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    john loving iii
    Date: 10/6/2012 1:27:00 PM
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    Self amusement.

    khan Avatar yasmin khan Date: 10/6/2012 1:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    self amusement???????????????????????????????????????
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    Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/6/2012 1:20:00 PM
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    What beautiful sentiment in this poem of love. Nice work.
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    Goran Rahim
    Date: 10/6/2012 11:19:00 AM
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    i love this tanka, very emotional and rommantic
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 10/6/2012 10:24:00 AM
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    Yasmin, i like Kash's comment... LOL... your spinning eyes and hearts weave me crazy, like your dreams...love the passion...~ have yourself a nice day~ XOX *PD
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    kash poet
    Date: 10/6/2012 8:56:00 AM
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    Wow!Hypnotized!!So romantic.Best wishes.
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    Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/6/2012 8:41:00 AM
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    As usual, another gorgeously romantic write my dear sweet Yasmin! Love and hugs, Jack
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 10/6/2012 6:34:00 AM
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    Perfect, this is a perfect write for Skat's contest! She will absolutely love this poem Yasmin, I just know! I really enjoyed this tremendous write that I read this morning my friend! I love this wondrous poem, a remarkable piece, Great Work!!
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 10/6/2012 5:12:00 AM
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    Yasmin, very sweet poem - You have a winning poems here - Good luck in the contest - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/6/2012 1:27:00 AM
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    Hey nice poem Yasmin it speaks volumes.....Good Luck for the contest. Well done - Shaz


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