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Poisoned Passion

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Poisoned Passion

"Poisoned Passion" hollow heart impaled tears blind eyes once touched by stars betrayed by love's ruse flesh and bone breath pain from grief dreams swallowed by molten ash. empty soul stings hurt love evaporates to dust golden Sun shines black passion's flames died in fierce blaze extinguishing emotions. masquerade exposed this "te-ta-te"called mere farce stolen moments cease paper mache' promises tumble shattered pedestal. *For P.D.'S Tanka Me a "Sad Song" Contest. *Oct. 5, 2012.

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  1. Date: 3/13/2014 2:57:00 AM

    love the romantic, voice... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 7:03:00 AM

    wonderful winner, congrats, sweetheart...

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 9:08:00 AM

    My hearty congratulations on your win my dear friend, Linda-M! love/hugs:) LG

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 5:06:00 PM

    Wonderful and very descriptive piece,Linda...This shows dexterity..Congratulations on your win....

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 3:47:00 PM

    congrats on your descriptive sad tanka set's win, Linda Marie!!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:41:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Linda-Marie. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:22:00 AM

    Congratulations on your smashing win Linda Marie xx

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 10:42:00 AM

    Love this explicit tale of sadness. Congrats on your win. :) Tanya

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 9:53:00 AM

    awesome poem friend Linda-Marie. Congratulations!! cheers!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 8:57:00 AM

    Congrats Linda Marie....awesome tanka!!!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 7:17:00 AM

    Congrats on your win! love "paper mache promises" :)

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 3:42:00 PM

    WON 3RD PLACE .. THANKXX

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 1:57:00 PM

    congrats on your win Linda Marie, great job

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:50:00 AM

    Linda,, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 8:31:00 AM

    You have captured the internal points where from sadness comes. Nice done, my sweet friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 11:56:00 AM

    Truly a sad one here Linda...loved the line 'paper mache' promises'...good luck with the contest.

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 2:29:00 PM

    LInda, it is so fun to see all your tankas here today. One more to see. Let's see if it is equal to this one that so well describes sadness.

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 12:59:00 PM

    great write Linda...winning wishes...luv

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 12:08:00 PM

    awesome write, my friend - a sure winner. Congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 10:33:00 AM

    Hello my beautiful Jersey Girl. So sorry for being absent. Work n Golf lol. Love to you all day from head to toe with pausing in the middle oops bad Michael. Love to you and all around you. Michael xoxo

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 6:31:00 AM

    Great write my friend. Words coming from heart always have the depths of a sad Song and they carry the emotions as can be seen in this lovely beautiful sad Poem Linda Marie. One can dive in the depths of some of its most beautiful lines sketch so beautifully by you. Another beautiful creation from the magic of your pen. My good wishes for your contest entry. I would take it in my fav. list. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra..SHLMB

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 9:21:00 AM

    A winner for sure my dear sweet Linda-Marie! A beautiful write... love and warm wishes, Jack xox

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 6:47:00 AM

    Beautiful. Very touching write. Good luck for the contest. Tfs

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 6:04:00 AM

    I am pretty sure it will be a winner in PD's contest. Thanks for sharing. Lucy

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 5:15:00 AM

    Yes, you have hit the nail on the head ..... this is very touching - You have a winning poem Linda-Marie - Good luck in the contest - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 12:45:00 AM

    This is so sad Linda. Pd is going to love this. All the best for the contest.

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 10:23:00 PM

    Hi Linda, my bff,,, I'm only taking a tiny little peek. before I log off...I read 3 lines only, so far so good... Thank you very much for your entry.. always~ your bff good night~ pd

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 10:21:00 PM

    I AM ALL TANKAED OUT TONIGHT WITH SO MANY CHALLENGING TANKS CONTESTS POETS BUT ALWAYS MANAGE TO END WITH ONE ON LOVE .. MY FAV SUBJECT .. ENJOY ..