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more dazzling


more dazzling
than the diamond pendant---
her deep cleavage

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  1. Dietrich Avatar
    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/8/2012 2:17:00 PM
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    hey, by the way, I understood your soupmail, and I am now taggling!!! Wheeeee. look at me.
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    jack horne
    Date: 10/7/2012 12:46:00 PM
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    lol, good one, Kash! Congrats on your wins : )
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 10/7/2012 8:33:00 AM
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    lol, now you are the one having the net glitches, kashi bud!...:) ding dong, i am here!..:) huggs!
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 10/7/2012 6:26:00 AM
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    A very well done Haiku again here Kash!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/7/2012 12:11:00 AM
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    'btw, Happy birthday. I was gonna do a blog and then I saw PD beat me to the punch. I will go there now since it is officially after midnight here now. Luv, andrea
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/7/2012 12:11:00 AM
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    ooh lalalala GOOD ONE
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 10/6/2012 10:00:00 AM
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    oh my God Dada,m you scandalize me..hahaaaaa naughty naughty but did you get dazzled, did she wear a diamond choker ????as usual your haikus are uniquely creative, enjoyed this one, no wonder you wear chashma..rfol!!!!!!nice to pull your leg,,,
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 10/6/2012 9:57:00 AM
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    A true gentleman does not tell. An early happy Birthday to you because I have an imperfect memory and might just forget.

    poet Avatar kash poet Date: 10/6/2012 10:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Joann!
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    Jack Ellison
    Date: 10/6/2012 7:32:00 AM
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    Yee haw! LOVE those deep deep cleavages! LOL
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 10/6/2012 7:21:00 AM
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    Enjoyed this deep poem, Kash, hope she doesn't get back ache!! Jag
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 10/6/2012 2:45:00 AM
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    you are a peeping tom, kashi bud, lol!... greaat element of surprise here.. amazing!:) huggs
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 10/5/2012 9:54:00 PM
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    spoken like a manly man Kash and written with umo too .. suoer visual here luv .. my hubby is grinning from ear to ear .. winner wow
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 10/5/2012 8:57:00 PM
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    Hi Kash, what are you going to do on your birthday? About your poem: wow! Your eyes sparkle the right way... :-), I hope the diamond was on a necklace that was lost deep in her cleavage... lol... , enjoyed stopping by;-) Good night~ LINDA
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    Shaz Cheesman
    Date: 10/5/2012 7:55:00 PM
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    Oh well done Kash......lol - Shaz
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 10/5/2012 2:49:00 PM
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    You write is truly phenomenal my friend! I really enjoyed this incredibly marvelous poem you have written! Fabulous write Kashi, I love this sentimental poem! What a wondrous piece, Great Work!!
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 10/5/2012 2:02:00 PM
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    - You are the master and I'm the student, well done Kash. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    David Williams
    Date: 10/5/2012 1:10:00 PM
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    Hey Kash, very cool write, a nice image, and nice to read your work again....David

    poet Avatar kash poet Date: 10/5/2012 1:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks David!Glad to see you around again!