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Dream State

Your life will be what you make of it
Follow your heart and be the best you can be
Not only will others be proud...you will be too
You live your life but once, so live it to the fullest
Awaken now from your dream and remember...
You must take responsibility for your life

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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:20:00 PM

    um....i think I like my dream state... however..I love this poem... and accepting in only a part of life... time to wake up... to bad my visions never some to life... ..xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 10:50:00 AM

    Carol..Your words to praise have sentences left in the ground for days.. i mean thank you for all your kind words. I have made it a point to read one of your poems each time I log on. thank you again.

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:09:00 PM

    My father used to say nothing in life is free, if you want it, you have to earn it and by doing that you will always be able to hold your head high. This inspired me to remember that, thank you.

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 7:58:00 PM

    Very true piece. Good read.

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 8:06:00 AM

    Cent percent correct. It's a nice remembrance. Thanks, loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 1:52:00 AM

    very nice advices given in this beautiful poem. thank you for sharing

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 2:14:00 PM

    What beauty your write is my friend! I am in awe with the splendor of this poem Carol! Your words of wisdom would make anyone proud! I really enjoyed reading this fine write this afternoon! Fabulous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 12:52:00 PM

    This could make a nice graduation speech.