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  1. Date: 8/17/2013 3:37:00 AM
    Beautiful and awesome piece. I am pleased to notify you that I used it to write a ROUNDEL titled LIFE LED BY THE THOUGHTS OF ANOTHER for the Richard Lamoureux's PICK A LINE ANY LINE! FREE POETRY CONTEST. Please check it out.

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:21:00 PM
    awe... well understood.. ~xox~pd

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 7:27:00 PM
    Carol, I like this very much. It is always best to follow your own steps and create your own way. I love it!

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 5:23:00 AM
    Great monuku.Never to follow someone's shadow!

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 11:52:00 PM
    "To Thine own self,be true." Yours sounds excellent also. Teenagers tend to follow those who they relate to and want to be important to them. among other things.

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 9:38:00 PM
    A very powerful statement. We should always be our self, not someone else's self. Really like this Carol.

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 4:47:00 AM
    Very profound! Thanks for sharing this lovely Monoku with us! Going to share it with my students.

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 12:09:00 PM
    Heavy powerful. I think, it's slavery. Wonderful Monoku. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:18:00 AM
    A powerful maxim with unmistakable urgency Carol - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 1:45:00 AM
    Very interesting work. Great one! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:41:00 PM
    This is so very much the truth my friend! I love this Monoku, very well said Carol, you have put together a very awesome write! I really enjoyed your talented poem that you so elaborately pieced together! You have aligned this with greatness, a beautiful one liner! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:08:00 PM
    VERY GOOD and profound!