Schism by harry horsman


bl devnath Date: 10/19/2012 8:29:00 AM "In the name of father" many things are done and divide people. Reality is on boom. Lovely done, my friend.
Modupe Sefunmi Date: 10/19/2012 2:39:00 AM Lovely write!
John Wulf Date: 10/13/2012 10:08:00 PM Schism - great word! Sounds a bit like applying a cheese grater on a tender turned cheek. I like how you send the reader on a journey with this one.
Jonas L. Rozario Date: 10/8/2012 9:31:00 AM This is very deep...I dig it. Should do well if written for a contest...thanks for stopping by my page!!!
mapaseka Prudence Tshuwa Date: 10/8/2012 6:30:00 AM we change the world with words, cheers to good writing.
Sara Kendrick Date: 10/7/2012 4:52:00 PM Yes, sometimes religion can cause problems where a true belief in God and His Son Jesus don't cause that problem because it is all about true love or agape love...A love that is hard for mankind to understand or get a grasp around but a love that we should all strive for in our lives..Thanks for stopping by..Your review of my work is always uplifting..Sara
Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/7/2012 2:30:00 PM Harry, "powerful lines" in your poem, very well written - Always intresant to read your poems Harry. Have a good and creativ week. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
jack horne Date: 10/7/2012 12:32:00 PM clever and thought provoking write, Harry
Jack Ellison Date: 10/7/2012 8:56:00 AM Very interesting and thought provoking, Harry... cheers, Jack
Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/7/2012 3:16:00 AM Profound words to ponder. Seems everyone has gone tanka crazy. . . But l adore them.
Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/6/2012 11:41:00 PM hmm, no new one. Let me know which clerihew is not entered in my contest and I will check it out!!!
Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/6/2012 5:21:00 PM harry this time you CAN make it more personal [subjective] and you CAN use metaphor, simile, personification etc...the last 2 lines should really show the emotions of the poet Light & Love kemosabe
Terry O'Leary Date: 10/6/2012 2:50:00 PM Oooo... very nice Harry, I like it... Terry (% thanks for your super kind comment!)...
Victoria Anderson-Throop Date: 10/6/2012 2:00:00 PM fine word choice... leaves the interpretation open to the reader...about religion? about family? It seems to me about religion.but perhaps I take the word schism too literally... Your work is intriguing and pleasantly discomforting..(like eating spicy food!) Victoria
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 10/6/2012 9:18:00 AM ASTOUNDING LINES HARRY LUV .. DEEP AND PENETRATING .. SVENGALI AT WORK WITH THIS POETIC ART MASTERPECE MY FRIEND ..
Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/6/2012 6:25:00 AM Interesting thoughts. Lovely. tfs
nette onclaud Date: 10/6/2012 2:52:00 AM wow, something to ponder deeply about, harry... enjoyed !...all the best and huggs!:)
Laura Breidenthal Date: 10/6/2012 12:54:00 AM Love it. Always, Laura
Lucilla Carrillo Date: 10/5/2012 5:01:00 PM Good write Harry. In The name of the Father. Thanks for sharing. Lucy
Sandy Ivy D Date: 10/5/2012 4:49:00 PM nice Sandy
David Williams Date: 10/5/2012 4:17:00 PM Harry there are memories of a sad youth in this for me, I reallly like it...David
Joe Maverick Date: 10/5/2012 1:36:00 PM This is a quite well presented write Harry, Intruiging and working well on its different levels .."
Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/5/2012 12:52:00 PM hmmm, yes, I am with Mandy here on this one. It's one to really think on. But the title seems to say it all!! WEll, let me find one of your oldies now!!
Constance La France Date: 10/5/2012 11:49:00 AM Hi Harry, a very deep poem. I want to thank you so much for my placement in your Curiosity Contest. I am very honoured. Love Constance
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 10/5/2012 11:47:00 AM very interesting, will think on this one for a while xx

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