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Schism

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Schism

You took innocence
sow seeds in maturing brain
create illusions
in the name of the father...
a lattice for prejudice.

© Harry J Horsman 2012   

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  1. Date: 10/19/2012 8:29:00 AM
    "In the name of father" many things are done and divide people. Reality is on boom. Lovely done, my friend.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 2:39:00 AM
    Lovely write!

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 10:08:00 PM
    Schism - great word! Sounds a bit like applying a cheese grater on a tender turned cheek. I like how you send the reader on a journey with this one.

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 9:31:00 AM
    This is very deep...I dig it. Should do well if written for a contest...thanks for stopping by my page!!!

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 6:30:00 AM
    we change the world with words, cheers to good writing.

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 4:52:00 PM
    Yes, sometimes religion can cause problems where a true belief in God and His Son Jesus don't cause that problem because it is all about true love or agape love...A love that is hard for mankind to understand or get a grasp around but a love that we should all strive for in our lives..Thanks for stopping by..Your review of my work is always uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 2:30:00 PM
    Harry, "powerful lines" in your poem, very well written - Always intresant to read your poems Harry. Have a good and creativ week. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 12:32:00 PM
    clever and thought provoking write, Harry

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 8:56:00 AM
    Very interesting and thought provoking, Harry... cheers, Jack

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 3:16:00 AM
    Profound words to ponder. Seems everyone has gone tanka crazy. . . But l adore them.

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 11:41:00 PM
    hmm, no new one. Let me know which clerihew is not entered in my contest and I will check it out!!!

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 5:21:00 PM
    harry this time you CAN make it more personal [subjective] and you CAN use metaphor, simile, personification etc...the last 2 lines should really show the emotions of the poet Light & Love kemosabe

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 2:50:00 PM
    Oooo... very nice Harry, I like it... Terry (% thanks for your super kind comment!)...

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 2:00:00 PM
    fine word choice... leaves the interpretation open to the reader...about religion? about family? It seems to me about religion.but perhaps I take the word schism too literally... Your work is intriguing and pleasantly discomforting..(like eating spicy food!) Victoria

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 9:18:00 AM
    ASTOUNDING LINES HARRY LUV .. DEEP AND PENETRATING .. SVENGALI AT WORK WITH THIS POETIC ART MASTERPECE MY FRIEND ..

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 6:25:00 AM
    Interesting thoughts. Lovely. tfs

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 2:52:00 AM
    wow, something to ponder deeply about, harry... enjoyed !...all the best and huggs!:)

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 12:54:00 AM
    Love it. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:01:00 PM
    Good write Harry. In The name of the Father. Thanks for sharing. Lucy

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 4:49:00 PM
    nice Sandy

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