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Schizo

Ain’t misbehavin’
so don’t make a fool of me...
I hear you knocking
you have taken my green eyes
now my inspiring poetess

© Harry j Horsman 2012   

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  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:25:00 AM

    Led Zep could do miracles with this premise! J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 2:52:00 PM

    Hmmm... green eyes... sounds like a very 'pregnant' topic... and you delivered!!! Terry

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:34:00 PM

    What a fully inspiring write my friend! I really enjoyed this wondrous and amazing poem! I love the line, "you have taken my green eyes" paints a fantastic image in my mind! Do you have green eyes? Those are very rare! Fabulous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:17:00 PM

    Harry great write, are they jealous eyes?..David

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 12:50:00 PM

    So you have those green eyes? Sure do love green eyes!! Do you know the rock song that has a line in it: "I hear you knocking. . . but you can't come in" ? I completely forgot the title of that song or who sings it, but your middle line made me think of it!

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 11:43:00 AM

    happy anniversary for tomorrow harry love this xx