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The Twisting Mind

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The Twisting Mind

The Twisted Mind
It behoves you well to delve in the twists and turns of my mind
As my thoughts undulate through the passages before the truth you find
Do the Tarantula March and dance well through the space
Where processing thoughts and words mingle, dancing with such grace…

Each twist, each turn, each thought kicked high, and then cleaved down low
Thrown and tossed out, chopped and diced, then a new thought does grow
My mind is dark, then light as can be, loving and warm but searching to be free.
Free from what my mind tied screams, yet I know I have heard the decree…

So pick your dance and partner well, as you skip through my mind in a twirl
The conglomeration of thoughts and brainstorms you may just unfurl
Tread carefully all those that want to know what lurks inside
You never just know the Devil, may have just taken a new bride…
©~GG~ 5/10/2102

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  1. Date: 10/17/2012 10:03:00 AM
    Enjoyed your take on the twisted mind here, Mandy! twisted mind but that also what makes it so intriguing! Just dropping by as well to say hi! :)

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 12:21:00 PM
    lol, so very true, Mandy - and I loved the last line : )

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 11:07:00 AM
    Great imagery... nicely woven... Terry

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 9:24:00 PM
    Mandy, your poem, is awesome. the mind is as twisted as can be, enjoyed stopping by;-) Good night~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:30:00 PM
    Mandy, love the twists and turns in this, they should do this on strictly come dancing, enjoy your hols and have a peaceful weekend..David

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:11:00 PM
    and don't worry if you are busy. I can't believe I am keeping up spending less time here than ever before.

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:10:00 PM
    VERY enjoyable this is. Is it for Drunken Pen contest?? It just seems to flow with your thoughts. I LOVE your conclusion on this one.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 10/5/2012 1:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    never thought about that but I may do now you have bought it to mind xx
  1. Date: 10/5/2012 7:11:00 AM
    Like the twist at the end..Enjoyed reading your creative lines this morn..Thanks for stopping by..I hope that you have a great time on your trip..Sara

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:06:00 AM
    wow, is this shakespeare or poe? in your mind, this is seriuos poetry Mandy... really love this to bits...will read this again and again.....

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 10/5/2012 5:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I always hold a little back to be released now and then, I may not be as simple as one thinks ha ha xx