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October Morn Rising

like a spotted fawn
digging with a tender hoof
in the drifting leaves
morning paints an autumn song
smiles upon the vivid mists

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  1. Date: 10/14/2012 4:20:00 AM

    Big congrats from Spain xx

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 10:13:00 PM

    nice tanka , well done. lee

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 11:53:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win friend Deb :)

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 7:56:00 AM

    Congrats on the win Deb! Loved this on my first read.

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 3:59:00 AM

    lovely soft imagery....Congrats on your great win with this beautiful Tanka!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 3:38:00 AM

    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 12:22:00 AM

    Another fall poem. Just love them like this. Big congrats.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 11:12:00 PM

    Beautiful Deb, Many congrats on this win.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 11:05:00 PM

    Beautiful scenery Deb! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 4:16:00 PM

    ahhhh personification of the dawn, one of my fav themes! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 12:42:00 PM

    A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Deb. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 12:06:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win, Deb. Su

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 8:53:00 PM

    Deb, , enjoyed stopping by;-) Good night~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:33:00 PM

    Deb, I love the image of this fawn in the early morning mist, well done...David

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 2:20:00 AM

    Just beautiful, Deb - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:32:00 AM

    Beautiful imagery here Deb.Love this.

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 11:17:00 PM

    Lovely scene in this verse, Deb! If it's for the contest: my best wishes! Ruben.