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Survivor

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Survivor

You look over she has a smile 
But you don't realize the pain inside her
She laughs and plays til the day goes away 
Just a normal kid you would think 
But behind those laughs and smiles 
You wouldn't know she's a survivor 
From a disease that took everything but her spirit 
When people thought it was too late 
A miracle happen that day 
She made it through sitting in the hopsital room 
Behind those laughs and smiles 
You wouldn't know she's a survivor

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  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:07:00 PM
    You nailed it, Katelin. Congrats on the selection. daver

    Barben Avatar Katelin Barben
    Date: 11/12/2012 4:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks (:
  1. Date: 11/7/2012 12:39:00 PM
    Nice poem Katelin. Congrats on your featured poem.

    Barben Avatar Katelin Barben
    Date: 11/12/2012 4:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you (: The first one i wrote.
  1. Date: 11/6/2012 6:06:00 AM
    Congrats on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Katelin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 9:28:00 AM
    Lovely write Katelin! The resilience of children is often astounding. They see life from the glass-is-half-full point. And adults can learn alot from them. Nicely done!

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:03:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Katelin. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol