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My mysterious obsession

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My mysterious obsession

You're so fine,
How can you keep it all to yourself,
Stunning is where I'll draw the line,
Not that you deserve to be displayed on a shelf,

Face, stark in comparison to another, 
Perhaps you're just to gorgeous to behold,
Maybe this person is your brother,
Someday my attraction will increase ten-fold,

You're driving me up a wall, 
I've had about all of you I can take,
Please dear don't let me fall,
Don't drop me please, for heavens sake, as we both know, I'm sure to break.

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  1. Date: 10/4/2012 8:10:00 PM

    Enjoyed your Quatrain, Roger...Fun to read and well written. Welcome to PS. Hope you'll enjoy it here. Annalise

    Eichmiller Avatar Richard Eichmiller Date: 10/5/2012 2:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you a ton, I'm not very good at this poetry, I'm still learning. Yours truly, Roger