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Sleepwalk

Oh, Can you see
Oh, Can you see

Can you, hear the music of moonlight 
walk the starlight at midnight

All along the Milky Way

Oh, Can you see
Oh, Can you see

Can you, hold my hand, in your hand... glide
walk with me on the sand, side by side
All along the Milky Way

Oh, Can you see

The night, the night is so dark 
and I am cold and waiting for you.
All at once, I reach out, 
you are there, waiting for me to.

Can you, hear the music of moonlight 
walk the starlight at midnight
all along the Milky way

Oh can you see…

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  1. Date: 11/5/2012 7:48:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Craig's "Sleepwalk" contest Debbie. Glad to see you made it through the storm. Hope your kitty is not to upset from the storm. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 6:12:00 AM
    congratulations on your win friend Debbie :) cheers! awesome poem

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 6:23:00 AM
    Big congratulations here Debb and i agree with Andy xx

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 2:20:00 AM
    this is one that I could see placed even higher! Congrats, Debs. You seem to have nailed it.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 1:13:00 AM
    CONGRATS DEBBIE ON A WONDERFUL SET OF LYRICS TO THE SLEEPWALK MELODY AND A GLORIOUS SWEET SUCCESS TOO LUV .. HOPE U HAVE POWER BACK ON AND R SAFE .. WE R STILL PICKING UP DEBRIS AROUND OUR HOME BUT ALL FAMILY SAFE ..

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 1:00:00 AM
    It's so beautiful! I feel like singing while reading it. Congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, Debbie! hugs:)Leonora

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 12:35:00 AM
    breathless, debbie.. congrats on the win!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 12:26:00 AM
    Congratulations ......Seren

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 10:23:00 PM
    Well done Debbie!! Congrats

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 6:12:00 PM
    Dear lady , congratulations with your awesome poem in Craig's "Sleepwalk" contest :-) take care~PD

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 11:23:00 PM
    Since I am not a full member, the youtube track is unavailable to me. I'll bet it's good.

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 10:40:00 PM
    oh...la la la la la...la la la.... : ) Very nice, Deborah! Best of luck in the contest! Hey...I almost forget...Check this page, you can find something interesting about tanka: http://www.criticalpoet.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=27664

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 7:05:00 PM
    I enjoyed the verse Debbie, I am back from Montreal, and I am glad I stopped in to see your treasured poem, love and light, vie