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Him

I let you in
You broke my heart.
I have no trust
I'm torn apart.

You seem fine
Though I'm stuck in pain.
So much change 
I've gone insane.

Things weren't as they seemed
Everything I knew is gone.
You've screwed up my world
So much here is wrong.

My life now is hell
I'm fighting everyday.
Though I don't see the point
I can't live this way.

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  1. Date: 10/6/2012 2:29:00 PM

    On your darkest day, the sun is shining somewhere and it will once again shine for you! Have heart... love and warm hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 2:57:00 PM

    no you can't,sad write with great rhymes Sabrina,don't be consumed by bad emotions

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 12:21:00 PM

    Please try your best to do what makes you happy in response to your poem written here...today I've read some really good poems and the flow of your poem is real smooth to my liking...enjoyed stopping by.