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Sleepwalk

Nighttime, in the silence of dream time,
I walk in the stillness with you,
With a hope that's renewed.
Trembling, lonely heart that's remembering,
An embrace that was new,
In the warm sun with you.
But now, now that you're gone,
The darkness is long, and the bright days are few.
So, I sleepwalk alone, alone with a song,
And sweet dreams of you.
Memories, I have nothing but memories
And a wish that tomorrow will bring,
A warm sleepwalk with you.



Written June 6, 2013
Nathan's Dream Contest

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  1. Date: 10/6/2012 12:19:00 PM

    Craig I love the romance in this, the need, the longing for a lost time, a hope and desire, just love it and nice to read your work again...David

    Williams Avatar David Williams Date: 10/6/2012 12:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    see you too have follower....
  1. Date: 10/5/2012 10:11:00 PM

    This is very nice, Craig. I really like this romantic sleepwalk!!! Keep up with these kinds of poems.

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 11:11:00 AM

    oh my, craig.. very beautiful ; i felt the whispers of longing and surely held the dream in my hands... this is soft, delightful, and sensory.. now, i'm having clay feet for your contest, lol... much delighted!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:16:00 AM

    A lovely sentimental write Craig. Liked it a lot.

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 4:27:00 PM

    Dreamy, sad... good poem! Terry (& thanks for your kind comments and placement)

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 11:54:00 AM

    Nice one Craig but its sad too, boy I could tell some stories about my sister sleepwalking xx

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 11:49:00 AM

    When I mentioned Sleep Walk/Sleepwalk to my husband, he was horrified that I did not know the tune. He is the one who suggested Hank Marvin's (the Shadows) cover of the song. I must agree - it has grown on me since. Love your interpretation of the tune, Graig. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 11:47:00 AM

    Beautifully done. I love this melody.

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 10:50:00 AM

    Very descriptive ensemble of words.